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Rawrtard Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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InternetIsSeriousBusiness Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Fri Jul 01, 2011 1:16 pm Post subject: |
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The image quality of the spiderman sucks. You also failed on the blur.
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Rawrtard Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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[readegamingfaggotrname] wrote: | The image quality of the spiderman sucks. You also failed on the blur. |
It's not the image quality, I applied a mosaic effect and then turned the opacity down. Try to know what you're talking about. Also How would you suggest the blur be done?
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Rawrtard Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Fri Jul 01, 2011 9:09 pm Post subject: |
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C'mon y'all
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Dillonz Grandmaster Cheater
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Random effects and probably you shouldn't use text at all. It looks like you're trying to censor Spiderman.
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Clairenix Grandmaster Cheater
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Bad effects, empty space, almost hard to read text, slapped on render. Overall boring.
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Rawrtard Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Sat Jul 02, 2011 7:16 pm Post subject: |
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I love how nobody reads or offers advice
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gogodr I post too much
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2/10
background doesnt blend very good with your main picture
The smudge effect is poorly done and way too present in the composition
The mosaic effect is out of place, shouldn't be there at all
the smudge layer is on top of the border wich makes it awful looking and unfinished.
since the main picture is line art and haves a dark border on itself the border of your composition should be present and on top of everything.
the font for "PlaceHolder" doesnt match the scene at all.
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Dillonz Grandmaster Cheater
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Rawrtard wrote: | I love how nobody reads or offers advice |
It is advice. Don't spam shitty affects all over the render and yes, we're well aware the text is a place holder but even if you were to change the text it wouldn't fit in and it adds to the ugliness of the overall signature.
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zyndr0m I post too much
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1. Focal point, there is none.
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Rawrtard Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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gogodr wrote: | 2/10
background doesnt blend very good with your main picture
The smudge effect is poorly done and way too present in the composition
The mosaic effect is out of place, shouldn't be there at all
the smudge layer is on top of the border wich makes it awful looking and unfinished.
since the main picture is line art and haves a dark border on itself the border of your composition should be present and on top of everything.
the font for "PlaceHolder" doesnt match the scene at all.
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Well, I tried out what you said, it seems awfully plain. I'm not sure what else to do. Also do you have a good font n mind? I can't seem to find one I like. Thanks
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GG Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Mon Jul 18, 2011 2:41 am Post subject: |
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It's pretty decent. Though in this case you should of chosen to either have a solid black border over EVERYTHING or extend certain parts that overlap the border, past the border (see attached image example).
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Here's my constructive feedback:
Your photo is is perfect for conveying an aura of pride. I could feel a moment of blissful heroism, with just a glimpse. Other than that, I don't know what else you were hoping for.
The bright blur helps the audience feel a sense of blissful ignorance. If you have not added the blur, the photo would have been nothing but a piece of a comic.
I'd say as long as your actions on the forum goes with the signature, it's a 10/10.
Yes, of course, the constructive criticism: Your art is missing the presence that it is evoking.
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Rawrtard I've never seen you improve. Ever. Please, go read tutorials and follow them.
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