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Bernie · Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 12:50 am Post subject: My robot.

So I'm into mechs, robots, etc. And I just draw some when I'm bored in class or if I make use of my desk I draw pictures. please rate.

gogodr · Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 1:35 am Post subject:

I wont rate it.. I'll just say ....

" Keep practicing "

Bernie · Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 1:38 am Post subject:

Heh, I guess it is pretty bad. I know I didn't use any light source, but I just wanna know what's wrong with the concept. If it doesn't match, etc. And I will clean it up when I'm happy with it.

gogodr · Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 1:53 am Post subject:

your mayor problem are proportions, better get some anatomy reference before making an humanoid?

ShadowHopeful · Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 12:28 pm Post subject:

The actual idea is pretty good, but it looks like you've taken several perspectives with the drawing, since the legs look slightly misplaced. and the left arm appears to have been bent backwards.

My question: "Deliberate, or mistake?"

PS. Keep working on it. It can only get better
(i am so looking forward to seeing a fixed and coloured version) Very Happy

Edit:
5/10 idea
4/10 anatomy
7/10 coolness
10/10 potential

7/10 Overall

To0k · Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 2:18 pm Post subject:

Looks good but the arms are fucked.

Bernie · Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 6:22 pm Post subject:

Alright, so I'll fix the arms and legs, but don't expect a quick fix. I'm very slow.

Phox · Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 7:02 pm Post subject:

You are actually pretty good at drawing random robot details that make drawings like this interesting to look at, but the proportions are sort of screwed up. For instance, I see where you're trying to go with his left hand facing outward, but it doesn't really look good.

Dillonz · Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 7:29 pm Post subject:

It's kind of messy. You need to work on proportions like said earlier. The body parts are facing different directions and are much too uneven.

@ShadowHopeful
It would be 6.5/10 overall :]

Bernie · Posted: Wed Dec 02, 2009 7:44 pm Post subject:

Thanks guys :3
I won't let your suggestions go to waste.

Dark X · Posted: Sat Dec 05, 2009 10:44 am Post subject:

not bad... Very Happy