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Clairenix
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 Posted: Tue Nov 10, 2009 8:18 am Post subject: [Finished, if you guys care about this shitty piece] |
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I'd share this with you guys and get some comments before I go too far since I plan on finishing it on photoshop. :3 This was done during class so I didn't really get the chance to finish it.
I already cropped the sketch of course.
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Sorry to say, but I like it better than your other works.
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Clairenix
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| Fucktard! wrote: | | Sorry to say, but I like it better than your other works. |
Not sure why you're sorry but I guess that means I've actually improved a bit. Thanks :3
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| Posted: Wed Nov 11, 2009 2:55 am Post subject: |
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| That left arm is a bit odd.
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Clairenix
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| T. wrote: | | That left arm is a bit odd. |
Care to explain? Exclude the fact that It's cutted, that's because I didn't draw that far yet.
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| Clairenix wrote: | | T. wrote: | | That left arm is a bit odd. |
Care to explain? Exclude the fact that It's cutted, that's because I didn't draw that far yet. |
Not symmetrical with the right counterpart. The left side of the torso is out of sync.
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Looks really good.
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Clairenix
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| T. wrote: | | Clairenix wrote: | | T. wrote: | | That left arm is a bit odd. |
Care to explain? Exclude the fact that It's cutted, that's because I didn't draw that far yet. |
Not symmetrical with the right counterpart. The left side of the torso is out of sync. |
Ooooh, cool thanks :3.
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| Clairenix wrote: | "] | T. wrote: | | Clairenix wrote: | | T. wrote: | | That left arm is a bit odd. |
Care to explain? Exclude the fact that It's cutted, that's because I didn't draw that far yet. |
Not symmetrical with the right counterpart. The left side of the torso is out of sync. |
Ooooh, cool thanks :3. |
Now that I look at it a bit more the right arm looks a bit off, but you can't exactly show an insane amount of depth in a sketch you did during class.
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| Clairenix wrote: | "] | Fucktard! wrote: | | Sorry to say, but I like it better than your other works. |
Not sure why you're sorry but I guess that means I've actually improved a bit. Thanks :3 |
Eh because you made a lot of other things and I thought you would rage at me liking a quick work better than something that may have taken you longer.
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| Looks pretty good, are we going to see the finished result anytime soon?
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Shouldn't the left breast protrude in front of the left arm, rather than behind it? Just like her right side.
Also, if that's meant to be Reisen, I'll have you know that her ears are genuine; not fake ones attached to a headband. :<
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| Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 2:56 am Post subject: |
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| xYashii wrote: | Shouldn't the left breast protrude in front of the left arm, rather than behind it? Just like her right side.
Also, if that's meant to be Reisen, I'll have you know that her ears are genuine; not fake ones attached to a headband. :< |
I'm surprised that this wasn't mentioned earlier.
It looks really awkward.
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I like it: ther eare some oddities
on the right, her left breast is supposed to go on top of her arm but it looks like it is under xP
I know hands are pretty hard , trick is dont go into much detail, try making it simple.
also the skirt is a little weird, I dont really know how to explain it, sorry xP
still its a nice sketch, I like it
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Clairenix
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| Posted: Thu Nov 26, 2009 4:19 am Post subject: |
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| gogodr wrote: | I like it: ther eare some oddities
on the right, her left breast is supposed to go on top of her arm but it looks like it is under xP
I know hands are pretty hard , trick is dont go into much detail, try making it simple.
also the skirt is a little weird, I dont really know how to explain it, sorry xP
still its a nice sketch, I like it |
Eh from my perspective, they could be hidden behind an arm. Considering that it isn't LARGE though.
Anyway, the piece was already done ages ago. I just didn't post it since nobody would really care and I didn't want any critique since I know some parts were sloppy.
http://clairenix.deviantart.com/art/Reisen-Fan-Art-144392778
Finished product if you guys are actually interested.
Anyway I know that the the shading was sloppy, I'm quite aware of that.
I know her ears were genuine btw, but eh It sucked without the headband so meh...
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