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Slappy101 I post too much
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Posted: Sun Oct 25, 2009 3:18 pm Post subject: Karate Vector |
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Made in Flash, trees imported from Illustrator.
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r34p3r Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Sun Oct 25, 2009 3:33 pm Post subject: |
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Blur lines put me off.
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bfsdbsdfbdsfb Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Sun Oct 25, 2009 4:12 pm Post subject: |
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There is no such stance in karate that I know of.
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Slappy101 I post too much
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Posted: Sun Oct 25, 2009 4:44 pm Post subject: |
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Okinawan Seidokan Kabudo Kata Passai
It's a stance in the above kata. I'm a black belt in Okinawan Seidokan (Lived in Okinawa, Japan for 6 years)
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bfsdbsdfbdsfb Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Sun Oct 25, 2009 5:12 pm Post subject: |
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:O Guess I'm just not that far yet
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~Lucifer~ Expert Cheater
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Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 6:36 am Post subject: |
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the blur on the black doesnt look that great to me. but other than that, good job.
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Up2Admin I'm a spammer
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Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 6:56 am Post subject: |
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Legs are too short and blur is odd. Good otherwise, liking the trees.
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taken4time How do I cheat?
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Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 10:02 am Post subject: |
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nice... i'd post my stuff but it's not gonna let me :\ -needs to be here longer-
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tayt3rtot Master Cheater
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Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 10:04 am Post subject: |
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taken4time wrote: | -needs to be here longer- |
You can add an attactment cant you? Or get a link and remove the http://www. cant you? o.O or do [img] thing?
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taken4time How do I cheat?
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Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 11:02 am Post subject: |
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tayt3rtot wrote: | taken4time wrote: | -needs to be here longer- |
You can add an attachment cant you? Or get a link and remove the ht tp: //w ww cant you? o.O or do [img] thing? |
1 removing the ht tp: // doesn't work you have to remove the CO M
2. i can add an attachment but links are easier
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zyndr0m I post too much
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Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 12:42 pm Post subject: |
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Hat should be bigger.
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Sharpies! Master Cheater
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Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 1:33 pm Post subject: |
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Unblur the person.
If you really want blur, blur the trees on the side, not what we're supposed to be looking at.
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Slappy101 I post too much
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Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 4:58 pm Post subject: |
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How's this?
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zackary Master Cheater
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Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 7:17 pm Post subject: |
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DUDE SWEET!
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p99 Master Cheater
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Posted: Tue Oct 27, 2009 9:42 pm Post subject: |
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See how easily you can change focus?
Before I was staring at the trees, now I look at the person and actually notice.
I'm not expert, and I don't mess with art too much anymore. But I'd take some more time working on your character. He just seems "odd", not horrendously done (as if I could do better), but just not "right".
Needs a little more definition in the waist and arms I think.
So that is a definite area of improvement... and the hat looks a bit odd, but I've never seen that style of hat aside from glimpses in movies, so I can't be one to judge.
But I really like the whole idea of the image itself :]
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