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Adolfo I'm a spammer
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 9:23 am Post subject: [=D]Approaching. (Updated)(Again) |
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First try at using a sprite and many C4D's xD
C&C please.
Ver2:
Is it better or worse?
New ones:
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Daniel. I post too much
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 9:31 am Post subject: |
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is that a sprite?
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~Lucifer~ Expert Cheater
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 9:47 am Post subject: |
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all the black on the left side is wasted space. get rid of it or use it for something.
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Adolfo I'm a spammer
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 9:51 am Post subject: |
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What could I add?
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Daniel. I post too much
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 9:59 am Post subject: |
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Adolfo wrote: | What could I add? |
a lil more effect on the left :3
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 10:11 am Post subject: |
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well im sure using an sprite is a very difficult thing, i think it needs flow some of the effects are killing the flow right now and the left side is too empty+ text is distracting
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 10:38 am Post subject: |
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Besides the left side, the sig overall is good.
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Adolfo I'm a spammer
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 11:19 am Post subject: |
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Maybe some blurred galaxy themed thing?
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Adolfo wrote: | Maybe some blurred galaxy themed thing? |
I don't know what that is, lol, but I think you should try a bunch of different things and see what it comes out looking like.
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Adolfo I'm a spammer
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 11:35 am Post subject: |
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Ok Updated.
What do you think?
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ResidentGenocide Advanced Cheater
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 11:38 am Post subject: |
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Doesn't look like you changed much, only the text position and some small splatter effect above it.
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 11:40 am Post subject: |
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New one is a bit better and worse at the same time imo for different reasons. The added effects on the left do help balance it a bit. However it's kinda weird to me now because you've basically killed the flow by making the purple part go top left > bottom right and the white part and the sprite do the opposite.
I still like it though. :] The C4Ds on the right are nice and I think you incorporated the sprite well.
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Adolfo I'm a spammer
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 11:50 am Post subject: |
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ResidentGenocide wrote: | Doesn't look like you changed much, only the text position and some small splatter effect above it. |
Nah, just added a texture and some smudging xD
Ill try to do many versions and will post em xD
Sharpies! wrote: | New one is a bit better and worse at the same time imo for different reasons. The added effects on the left do help balance it a bit. However it's kinda weird to me now because you've basically killed the flow by making the purple part go top left > bottom right and the white part and the sprite do the opposite.
I still like it though. :] The C4Ds on the right are nice and I think you incorporated the sprite well. |
True that. That is because the purple lines were an accident, a nice accident I mean xD Its a C4D and when I was changing the blendig modes it got on Hue and it looked how it looks now xD
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 1:21 pm Post subject: |
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V.3 has this little bubble that seems to suck in attention. ;-;
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Adolfo I'm a spammer
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Posted: Sat Sep 19, 2009 1:29 pm Post subject: |
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Its a planet xD
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