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Thanh Master Cheater
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Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 4:40 pm Post subject: Misa Campo Signature. |
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Edited V2:
Edited V3:
Eh... Looks boring on the right side, but I don't know what else to add.
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To0k How do I cheat?
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Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 4:54 pm Post subject: |
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The sig itself is too big and the render is too small.
Effects are ok. |
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Thanh Master Cheater
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Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 6:09 pm Post subject: |
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Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 7:10 pm Post subject: |
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I agree its too big, maybe theres a way you could cut off the right side up to the point where the glowing line ends.
V2 is better but I think both work with the render either way. |
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Thanh Master Cheater
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Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 7:59 pm Post subject: |
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Updated again, tell me what else I should do. :p |
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Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 8:45 pm Post subject: |
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its kinda smexy but yea need more deteails  |
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Cryoma Member of the Year
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Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 9:39 pm Post subject: |
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Talix wrote: | Protip: Never put the focal at the center. |
Retardtip.
The only bad part about this is her skin color, it should match the upper left. |
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Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 9:46 pm Post subject: |
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Cryoma wrote: | Talix wrote: | Protip: Never put the focal at the center. |
Retardtip.
The only bad part about this is her skin color, it should match the upper left. |
Not just the skin color, its also the detail there is not that much detail all it is, is a women in the picture with a zoom in on her boobs o the left side. And btw the right side should have something there 2 |
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Thanh Master Cheater
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Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 9:54 pm Post subject: |
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spider45 (dib1500) wrote: | Cryoma wrote: | Talix wrote: | Protip: Never put the focal at the center. |
Retardtip.
The only bad part about this is her skin color, it should match the upper left. |
Not just the skin color, its also the detail there is not that much detail all it is, is a women in the picture with a zoom in on her boobs o the left side. And btw the right side should have something there 2 |
detail detail detail. You're vague. |
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Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 9:58 pm Post subject: |
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Thanh wrote: | spider45 (dib1500) wrote: | Cryoma wrote: | Talix wrote: | Protip: Never put the focal at the center. |
Retardtip.
The only bad part about this is her skin color, it should match the upper left. |
Not just the skin color, its also the detail there is not that much detail all it is, is a women in the picture with a zoom in on her boobs o the left side. And btw the right side should have something there 2 |
detail detail detail. You're vague. |
Ok well at least put a different bg like flames cause the first bg looks plane also if u dnt wanna remove it put some other stuff. i know its vague but im not the 1 using these tips im just giving u ideas. ur the 1 thts suppose to think about some stuff to put inside tht pic not me... |
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Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 10:05 pm Post subject: |
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Talix wrote: | spider45 (dib1500) wrote: | Thanh wrote: | spider45 (dib1500) wrote: | Cryoma wrote: | Talix wrote: | Protip: Never put the focal at the center. |
Retardtip.
The only bad part about this is her skin color, it should match the upper left. |
Not just the skin color, its also the detail there is not that much detail all it is, is a women in the picture with a zoom in on her boobs o the left side. And btw the right side should have something there 2 |
detail detail detail. You're vague. |
Ok well at least put a different bg like flames cause the first bg looks plane also if u dnt wanna remove it put some other stuff. i know its vague but im not the 1 using these tips im just giving u ideas. ur the 1 thts suppose to think about some stuff to put inside tht pic not me... |
And if you're going to give advice, then at least know how to
1. spell
2. use english
3. use the forum
4. know what you're talking about.
Okay? |
i know what i'm talking about -_- |
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Phixen I post too much
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Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 11:04 pm Post subject: |
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The orange and the blue are out-of place. Text placement could use some work, you also need to make the text not stand out so much, or else it'll become the focal. The thinner pentool work seems to ruin the flow. |
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Adolfo I'm a spammer
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Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 11:08 pm Post subject: |
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I kinda like it but I feel that all the sig is of a same color and it has no changes at all except for that wave or curve you made possibly with the pentool. I was more focused on the tongue of the girl that in the sig itself, that means you did something wrong. _________________
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Phixen I post too much
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Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 11:10 pm Post subject: |
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Adolfo wrote: | I kinda like it but I feel that all the sig is of a same color and it has no changes at all except for that wave or curve you made possibly with the pentool. I was more focused on the tongue of the girl that in the sig itself, that means you did something wrong. |
Thanh wouldn't intend the whole sig to be the focal, would he? |
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Adolfo I'm a spammer
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Posted: Fri Sep 18, 2009 11:16 pm Post subject: |
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Obviously not, its just that it could be worked more. Idk I amde a quick sharpen and erase and it looks almost the same but with a little more depth.
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