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zarakima Cheater
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Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 6:42 am Post subject: Zarakima's Artbook (under development) |
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So yeah, im pretty new to CEF and would appreciate some helpful advice on improving my artwork, please no trolls. i will try and get more of my work onto the forum depending on feedback, all name suggestions welcome, thank you.
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goiceice Advanced Cheater
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Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 12:47 pm Post subject: Good |
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It looks pretty good mabye a boss in an rpg would look great in flash
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Up2Admin I'm a spammer
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Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 5:08 pm Post subject: |
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Nice, but there's almost no depth...
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Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 8:39 pm Post subject: |
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Also the design itself needs some work, his feet are too small for his body and some of the muscles look weird.
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Up2Admin I'm a spammer
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Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 8:47 pm Post subject: |
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Yes. As explained in a very awesome tutorial, by a very awesome person; you cannot "create" muscles, you need to have knowledge of analogy and maybe use a reference.
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ib4 .....
its a monster... have you guys ever seen a monster? no? ok so do you guys knows what it should look like? no, then xP its up to the creator to make proportions since its something new that doesn't exist.
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"I think" feet looks at bit wrong , looks kinda like the perspective of the right foot is wrong or the monster haves a broken feet
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CrisNMP Fun Supervisor
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They're mainly personal opinions of what I would suggest if I was going for mutant. Just because hes a mutant doesn't mean he should have a tumour on his left bicep and if he wants to emphasize the brute in the mutant then he should enlarge the right foot.
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Posted: Tue Sep 01, 2009 9:39 pm Post subject: |
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It's like better than mines.
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| gogodr wrote: | ib4 .....
its a monster... have you guys ever seen a monster? no? ok so do you guys knows what it should look like? no, then xP its up to the creator to make proportions since its something new that doesn't exist.
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"I think" feet looks at bit wrong , looks kinda like the perspective of the right foot is wrong or the monster haves a broken feet | Yes it's up to the creator, but the viewer has a say in artwork as well. If the feet are unproportioned and if the creature were to be real, it would have a hard time balancing itself. Creatures like this should contain proper anatomy in order to look good. Otherwise, you'll get feedback like this.
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Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 1:49 am Post subject: |
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| I like it I enjoy the stitches on the arm, it's quite detailed. But yes, the feet are just a bit small.
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zarakima Cheater
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Posted: Wed Sep 02, 2009 8:48 am Post subject: |
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ok, i will do some work on the feet, also i realise it is quite disprportionate it is a mutant and i was 13 years old wen i drew it, i will soon attempt to get my crappy epson 2000 scanner to copy some of my most recent work, i appreciate the praise and CC, keep it up
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