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Jē Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 12:54 am Post subject: [JD] Blackout Siggy Updated |
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This is my second siggy.
It was kinda hard to find a direction for the flow with this render, so I concentrated on the depth and gave it its own direction. The white bar was experimental and breaks the fake flow a bit, tell me if that should stay or go.
Rate the depth, lighting and flow 1-10 if you would please.
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BTW: I plan on being a big part of the art section from here on out, get used to me being here.
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Honda Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 12:59 am Post subject: |
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Not bad
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Jeff Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 1:15 am Post subject: |
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| what's with the white line?
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Up2Admin I'm a spammer
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Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 1:16 am Post subject: |
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I think I'ma make a siggy...
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Honda Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 1:29 am Post subject: |
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| Jeff wrote: | | what's with the white line? |
He said he was testing it so it can break the flow a bit.
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Jē Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 1:51 am Post subject: |
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| Jeff wrote: | | what's with the white line? |
Tis experimental, lern2read.
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Trucido Moderator
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Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 2:12 am Post subject: |
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Rule of thumb: Scan lines suck.
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Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 2:21 am Post subject: |
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I would delete the white line above the render.
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Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 4:29 am Post subject: |
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| Font is a bit off.
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GG Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 5:09 am Post subject: |
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Great, 9/10
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Jē Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Thu Jun 25, 2009 10:27 am Post subject: |
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Ok, I was just seeing what people thought of the line, it's going away. I can also fix the font easily.
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