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Farr. Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Sun May 31, 2009 8:44 am Post subject: Second Attempt |
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ok so I took your advice and I've made a second sig. I took a stock, tried to blend the image in with the background, added lighting effects and only put my name on it. Again, tell me what you like and dislike about it. I personally think I made the lighting a bit too intense.
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1929394839292057839194958 Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Sun May 31, 2009 8:55 am Post subject: |
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A tip, try to make the focal point the render (It's a stock, I know), in this case amrio would be the focal point, but you've blurred all over him for some reason. Try to create depth by dodging and burning the background at certain spots, just behind or infront of the render. Try to blur the background a tiny tiny bit and NOT blur the focal (Mario). Gj
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Stylised Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Sun May 31, 2009 8:58 am Post subject: |
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The render in front should look like it's in the front, and transparent mario doesn't look too good.
Nice.
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Phox I post too much
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Posted: Sun May 31, 2009 9:03 am Post subject: |
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I don't think it's to intense. You should see the walls of my room (neon orange). You don't think ANYTHING is too intense in my house lol.
Seriously though, you did a good job but his hand is a tiny bit too blurred.
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Saya Master Cheater
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Posted: Sun May 31, 2009 9:23 am Post subject: |
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Near the hat Mario's skin kinda of turns green.
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