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NooksCranny
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 Posted: Mon May 25, 2009 9:06 pm Post subject: Another Sig. |
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This sig i wasn't very confident with. I think it turned out pretty bad, but i might as well get some critism on it. please tell me how i can make it better.
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| Posted: Mon May 25, 2009 9:12 pm Post subject: |
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The numbers on the top ruin it. Overall I like it.
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| Posted: Mon May 25, 2009 9:21 pm Post subject: |
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| Entima wrote: | | The numbers on the top ruin it. Overall I like it. |
serious? i added the numbers to add so nice effects, but if they look bad i will remove them.
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| Posted: Mon May 25, 2009 9:24 pm Post subject: |
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No blending; to me it seems like you just took a render and stuck it in a background.
Text; you have random text all over the place which distracts too much attention and then the "Redcard" in the far right corner is barely visible.
Lighting; wouldn't worry about it too much until you get the top 2 right but that doesn't change the fact it could use some work.
All-in-all= 6/10
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NooksCranny
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| Posted: Mon May 25, 2009 9:26 pm Post subject: |
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| Flayre wrote: | No blending; to me it seems like you just took a render and stuck it in a background.
Text; you have random text all over the place which distracts too much attention and then the "Redcard" in the far right corner is barely visible.
Lighting; wouldn't worry about it too much until you get the top 2 right but that doesn't change the fact it could use some work.
All-in-all= 6/10 |
yeah the left side has no blending..
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| Posted: Mon May 25, 2009 9:28 pm Post subject: |
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| And overuse of splatter brushes.
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| Posted: Mon May 25, 2009 9:31 pm Post subject: |
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| Flayre wrote: | | And overuse of splatter brushes. |
lol i was trying to go for a more abstract look, but i guess it fails. Thanks anyways. could you suggest what i need to do to the left side to make it look better?
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| RedCard wrote: | | Flayre wrote: | | And overuse of splatter brushes. |
lol i was trying to go for a more abstract look, but i guess it fails. Thanks anyways. |
You should keep trying. You'll get better at it the more you try.
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| Posted: Mon May 25, 2009 11:14 pm Post subject: |
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| Find some flow with the render. If you cannot find the flow, use a different render. Do not rely on C4Ds too often.
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| Posted: Mon May 25, 2009 11:44 pm Post subject: |
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| Yaoi wrote: | | Find some flow with the render. If you cannot find the flow, use a different render. Do not rely on C4Ds too often. |
thanks. i am trying to branch away from C4Ds
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