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Sharpies! Master Cheater
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 2:31 pm Post subject: |
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I'm going to agree with everyone else on the fact that that texture toward the bottom is going aweeeesome.
I'm thinking because it's a ghost, if you don't plan on doing a background, consider making some of the edges of his body a bit softer? He is a ghost after all. :3
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Slappy101 I post too much
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 4:21 pm Post subject: |
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Some really soft shading inside the eyes maybe? It looks amazing though
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 4:36 pm Post subject: |
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So pro. Can you tell what type of brushes you've been using on it. I can seem to find any that can get the effects I've been wanting.
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 6:47 pm Post subject: |
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| Sharpies! wrote: | | consider making some of the edges of his body a bit softer? |
I agree with this; apart from the eyes, the only other problem I see is that the outline seems very out of place.
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 6:56 pm Post subject: |
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10/10
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Love it.
Haunter is amazing... and this is a little spooky.
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CrisNMP Fun Supervisor
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 9:38 pm Post subject: |
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Thanks for the comments
| Wahoa wrote: | | Sharpies! wrote: | | consider making some of the edges of his body a bit softer? |
I agree with this; apart from the eyes, the only other problem I see is that the outline seems very out of place. |
what part are you guys talking about in the outline
| Jē wrote: | | So pro. Can you tell what type of brushes you've been using on it. I can seem to find any that can get the effects I've been wanting. |
Standard brush with pen pressure for size and different opacity levels for blending. Use the numpad to quickly change the opacity of the brush when you're using it.
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 9:42 pm Post subject: |
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| CrisNMP wrote: |
what part are you guys talking about in the outline. |
We're talking about the outline in general. Ghosts aren't solid, so some parts should be fading/blurring away on the edges for a more "ghosty" feel. The fact that you made a point of having texture makes it less cartoon-like. The outline that abruptly ends the shape of Haunter offsets that visually.
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CrisNMP Fun Supervisor
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 9:43 pm Post subject: |
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I'll post the last version I have soon to see if is still a problem or if I got rid of it.
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 10:45 pm Post subject: |
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fucking awesomeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee
There are some transparency issues on the latest one (if you look at it against a white background - this one I mean http://i48.tinypic.com/34dgdmv.jpg ).
Put a red background on a layer below in PS so you can see where.
Looks hot though.
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Posted: Thu Jan 14, 2010 10:53 pm Post subject: |
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The left hand looks at little weird.
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Posted: Fri Jan 15, 2010 7:57 pm Post subject: |
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Awesome, I really like the work you added on the forehead area, hope to see it added to your wallpapers section soon
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Posted: Fri Jan 15, 2010 11:32 pm Post subject: |
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Criticism: I see great details in the body and hands, great usage of a light source. The light and dark values seem to be balanced.Texture is going about nicely, the outline on the right hand is a bit messy it could use a little bit of cleaning up. And the right hand also is not in the same texture as the other hand or body. Other than that great job so far.
Edit:I just saw your last update nevermind you have blended it back plus you are removing the outline so it should be fine now. But one thing about the left hand you should keep a bit of the outline on the right side of the fingers to show the fingers so it doesn't look like it is part of the hand.
Offtopic: What program are you using Cris? Flash? Photoshop?
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Slappy101 I post too much
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 5:28 pm Post subject: |
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Maximus, he's using Photoshop
Also Cris, what kind of tablet do you use? The Intuos 4's price was just reduced by $100
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Posted: Sat Jan 16, 2010 6:06 pm Post subject: |
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| Slappy101 wrote: | Maximus, he's using Photoshop
Also Cris, what kind of tablet do you use? The Intuos 4's price was just reduced by $100  |
I am using the walcom bamboo $50 but i don't think you don't care haha.
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