Cheat Engine

[Daniel.]

Comment and Critique

yea it's pretty shit

[Kronos]

Looks pretty good, the colors are nice, good flow and c4d effects. The main issue i see is that the bg is totaly not fitting the render well, and ofcourse the whole piece is way too blurry, focal needs to stand out more. Good work anyway :)

[Daniel.]

[gogodr]

Honestly I disagree with Kronos.
I think that the 3d elements are not placed correctly since some parts are way too sharp for the rest of the composition.
Also the bottom light effect is not helping into focusing on the main thing which is the character in here.
Also the thick white border kills it.

What I would do:

to the 3D elements: I would apply a very strong motion blur and make the character look like it is just landing with a great impact by adding some motion lines.

to the lighting: focus it more on the center of the composition is a more round manner.

To the border: make a thin black boder instead of the white one or maybe a thick black movie caption like border.

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No border please. Use dodge/burn to make lighting perfect etc I'll give more detail when I'm back.

[Daniel.]