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ZeXro- Advanced Cheater
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Posted: Wed Jan 19, 2011 8:55 am Post subject: First C4D Sig ^^ |
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Updated ^^
Accept Critic =).
EDIT: OMG I just saw the weird hand xD
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CrisNMP Fun Supervisor
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Posted: Wed Jan 19, 2011 12:11 pm Post subject: |
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The Fish Expert Cheater
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Posted: Wed Jan 19, 2011 12:43 pm Post subject: |
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It hurts my head.
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Solomon Grundy Cheater
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Posted: Wed Jan 19, 2011 3:54 pm Post subject: |
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I don't think the background meshes to well with the terrorist guy.
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kewl story, bro How do I cheat?
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Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2011 7:14 pm Post subject: |
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Its alright not bad though
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trebor Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Wed Feb 02, 2011 8:03 pm Post subject: |
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Text is terrible
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hackerdvm Master Cheater
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Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2011 2:50 pm Post subject: |
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Its all blurred i cant even make out what is blurred or not... not trying to be mean try some tutorials they can help you. It makes you better by teaching you different techniques cause every one told me to do tutorials and i ignored them but i decided to do some and i am way better now.
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ThatGuyAgain Expert Cheater
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Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2011 3:32 pm Post subject: |
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I like it but the text should be bigger and a different colour or font.
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Stylised Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2011 9:29 pm Post subject: |
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Looks like shit.
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InternetIsSeriousBusiness Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2011 9:31 pm Post subject: |
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The background sucks.
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Mike Scott Expert Cheater
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Posted: Fri Feb 04, 2011 9:37 pm Post subject: |
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The disintegration (?) is way too thick. It just looks like he got hit by a wave of multicolored legos. Take a nice powder brush and erase at about 50% opacity over it and see if that helps. A splatter brush would to fine as well.
There's also some funny water coming out of his left hand, not sure if that fits so well.
The BG could also be a bit better. Include something that wraps around him, makes him feel more part of the tag, not just stuck on there.
Hope I helped
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ZeXro- Advanced Cheater
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Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2011 11:28 am Post subject: |
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Mike Scott wrote: | The disintegration (?) is way too thick. It just looks like he got hit by a wave of multicolored legos. Take a nice powder brush and erase at about 50% opacity over it and see if that helps. A splatter brush would to fine as well.
There's also some funny water coming out of his left hand, not sure if that fits so well.
The BG could also be a bit better. Include something that wraps around him, makes him feel more part of the tag, not just stuck on there.
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Thanks,you are the only one that gave me real critic.I'll see next time I make the Back-Ground better.
EDIT: Yeah,yiu guys gave me real critic too(only some of them), thx :3
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1929394839292057839194958 Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2011 7:23 pm Post subject: |
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Nice one putting the fucking arm feathered out across his upper arm? Fucking retarded.
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Stylised Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2011 9:39 pm Post subject: |
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konr wrote: | Nice one putting the fucking arm feathered out across his upper arm? Fucking retarded. |
You can actually understand what's happening in the picture? Amazing.
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InternetIsSeriousBusiness Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Sat Feb 05, 2011 9:42 pm Post subject: |
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Stylised wrote: | konr wrote: | Nice one putting the fucking arm feathered out across his upper arm? Fucking retarded. |
You can actually understand what's happening in the picture? Amazing. |
I know, the person looks so fucking bad, because he over-rendered it.
And the background looks like spilled oil in a parking lot.
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