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gogodr I post too much
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Posted: Sun Jan 09, 2011 8:50 pm Post subject: |
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please upload to:
soundcloud
goear
or newgrounds
so we can listen online and give crits without having to download it.
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Newgrounds link added
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gogodr I post too much
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the tempo is all messed up x-x
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Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 2:33 pm Post subject: |
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hell no, I matched it up with a metronome, i think the kick just distorts everything though
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It's good, but not great.
There is a period like between 1:02-1:05 I didn't like.
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gogodr I post too much
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Microsoft wrote: | hell no, I matched it up with a metronome, i think the kick just distorts everything though |
I have been in music for over 10 years and I can tell you. the tempo is all messed up.
I don't mean the main tempo but the performance is not following it.
all the performance is all awkward and off tempo(not in the good way).
Here is one I made with a "similar" feeling to it.
you can hear how it matches in tempo perfectly which is what you need to do.
http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/254555
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Cryoma Member of the Year
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The tempo IS messed up, you just added pauses between bars on the faster tracks so they lined up with the slower ones.
I don't know if you did that on purpose or what, but it sounds terribly wacky.
What software are you using?
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Posted: Tue Jan 11, 2011 8:21 pm Post subject: |
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Cryoma wrote: | The tempo IS messed up, you just added pauses between bars on the faster tracks so they lined up with the slower ones.
I don't know if you did that on purpose or what, but it sounds terribly wacky.
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Cubase 5. Also, I got rid of that sound in general, turns out it has delay sound every time a key is pressed. I just replaced it with a more trancey sound, I'll upload a newer version once I'm somewhat content with it.
Edit: http://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/390694
heres the revision.
There are a couple solos toward the end
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Have you considered creating Experimental, IDM, Glitch and/or Drum N' Bass???
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