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The Ants and The frog WIP ((v2))

 
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PostPosted: Fri Jul 30, 2010 3:42 pm    Post subject: The Ants and The frog WIP ((v2)) Reply with quote



got this so far.
I'm using an old sculpt I made of a frog xP added UVs and the scene




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PostPosted: Fri Jul 30, 2010 11:47 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

What were the results of the last contest :3?

Just stating the obvious; the frogs front "hands" are floating, and some rocks are really edgy.
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 31, 2010 12:40 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

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WHY ARE YOU REPOSTING THIS?
I think we've all said that you need to change the textures. I don't care if you "haven't got to it" yet, get to it. I'm not trying to be mean or anything, just giving kunstruktiv kritisizm.

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PostPosted: Sat Jul 31, 2010 3:14 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Sephiron wrote:
GOGODR
WHY ARE YOU REPOSTING THIS?
I think we've all said that you need to change the textures. I don't care if you "haven't got to it" yet, get to it. I'm not trying to be mean or anything, just giving kunstruktiv kritisizm.
If I remember correctly it was posted in RS; they don't recommend the best things & the thread was probably filled with stupid replies (though I can't speak for sure as I didn't view it)
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 31, 2010 5:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

I post it here as a WIP Thread.
I'll be updating it here. the thread at RS was just a catch attention thread.

right now I'm working on the modeling and the scene.

Project:

the ants are just reference meshes, I'm making them detailed.

the rocks are reference meshes too, you can see the polygons on them, I'll smooth them for the render version.

going to add a river and more rocks on the ground.

and some detail like some grass strains or branches here and there.

then I'll start working on the materials, and as for the lighting I think it is going to stay simple like that, just a skylight.
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 31, 2010 9:41 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Looks pretty cool. you may want to make the frogs feet curl around the rocks/add webbing.
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PostPosted: Sat Jul 31, 2010 2:19 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Mouth section looks a bit pointy, shorten it and make it round

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Frog

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 9:47 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

little update

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PostPosted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 10:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Better, but the frog still looks wrong.
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 12:46 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

You guys are totally missing the point.
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 01, 2010 5:04 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

This is much, MUCH better.
Still, the single tone frog looks odd.

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PostPosted: Mon Aug 02, 2010 11:41 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

get zbrush and make the frog a lumpy skinned toad , you can also "color" the model in zbrush so you can make the spotted texture real nice.
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 10:34 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Appreciate the simplicity of the ants but I feel you should let them deviate a slight bit rather than a mathematically perfect line.
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PostPosted: Sat Aug 07, 2010 11:11 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Is that a paper texture I see for the ground?
Also the frog looks too plastic and uniform.
The bumps have the right scale, but they're not random enough.
The pose isn't quite right, it doesn't look natural.
And the feet should wrap around the rocks a little.
Shadows look kinda LQ, but I assume that's because of the sandy texture?
Rocks look a tiny bit too smooth (again, a little randomness wouldn't go amiss).
Still, pretty nice so far.
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