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gogodr I post too much
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Posted: Mon Jan 25, 2010 6:30 pm Post subject: New Character attemp (( 3DsMax ))(WIP)(updated) |
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UPDATE:
fixed arms and shoulders a little.

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Daniel. I post too much
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hands are uhh...awkward _________________
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redslothx Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Proportions are all off for a human. _________________
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gogodr I post too much
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| Riley Sloth wrote: | | Proportions are all off for a human. |
how come ? I'm using photo reference, only thing that is left to tweak on that wires is the arms which needs to be thicker. |
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I think it's just the position the hands are in, they look fine to me. Only thing I think is weird is the middle area of the chest. The pecs are too far out for someone without any abs. _________________
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Up2Admin I'm a spammer
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Forearms are too short and the hands are too long.
Now, if I were you, I totally ditch the human concept and make the forearms extremely long with hooks at the end. Then it could slaughter millions with nothing bu... [and the sentence trails on.] _________________
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| gogodr wrote: | | Riley Sloth wrote: | | Proportions are all off for a human. |
how come ? I'm using photo reference, only thing that is left to tweak on that wires is the arms which needs to be thicker. |
Palms: too big and flat for the body
Fingers: too long for the palms
Upper arm(bicep area): too short. Feels cut off near the joint.
Lower arm: too skinny and short. It's not proportional to upper arm.
However, your main problem here is the ridiculously large hands. Reduce side by a bit and it might resemble the appearance of a younger teenage boy.
found this in a quick search:
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gogodr I post too much
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thanks, that helps a lot.  |
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| oh lord, he has gorilla hands. fix them ;p |
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redslothx Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Armits are too low + hands too small now.
(Fix forearms before you fix the hands) |
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Yes the armpits are quite low, also, the chest looks like a canyon. _________________
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Hands are fine. Armpits are too low and the forearms are too thick. _________________
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The problem is that you're not adding enough mass to the arms.
Did this real quick =x
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gogodr I post too much
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Posted: Tue Jan 26, 2010 10:11 pm Post subject: |
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| kk, thanks for the feedback guys. |
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| I know a dude called clyzm that does this shit all the time. If you like I can get him to add you on MSN. |
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