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hkkx Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 1:49 pm Post subject: |
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thats pretty awesome, but i think left leg is fat
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To0k How do I cheat?
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 5:06 pm Post subject: |
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Only thing you should get rid off is the table.
9/10
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Ze[X]ro Master Cheater
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 9:34 pm Post subject: |
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Eyes are too big lol and the table.....
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Zohan Gayest Man Alive
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 9:43 pm Post subject: |
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| Fix the table, fix the white streak on hair and remove it from forehead, redreaw the legs and skirt, fix the tears, and thats about it.
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Clairenix Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 10:26 pm Post subject: |
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| RAV3N wrote: | | if only you weren't too lazy to make a background I'd love it even more. I think you're really talented so it's just a shame that I can't see what it would have looked like with a background. But only judging the character, 9/10 for me. |
Well, It's not actually because I'm lazy but rather, it's because of the fact that I'm not sure where to begin in making the background look better.
Anyway for those who said comments about the background and table being shit lol, I guess I'll just try to use realistic images and change their shading into hard cell.
And for the character, thanks.
| Spy wrote: | | Fix the table, fix the white streak on hair and remove it from forehead, redreaw the legs and skirt, fix the tears, and thats about it. |
I would've removed the white on the forehead but I already merged the layers, and the shading had a gradual darkening so couldn't really remove it without messing it up.
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cokefag Master Cheater
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 11:12 pm Post subject: |
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I don't like it.
The envelope shouldn't have "goodbye..." written on it.
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zyndr0m I post too much
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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 8:00 am Post subject: |
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| Physic... Fails here.
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Shadix Newbie cheater
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Posted: Sat Jan 23, 2010 12:55 am Post subject: |
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| i like it 7.5/10
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Urukhai Cheater
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Posted: Fri Jan 29, 2010 2:17 am Post subject: |
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Looks good enough to start a comic book!
But the letter on table seems a bit disoriented.
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