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Arachnophobia Expert Cheater
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Posted: Sat Jan 02, 2010 6:23 pm Post subject: |
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for some reason, i dont see it anymore, not even as a box with a x.
Did you take it off temporarily?
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ListenT How do I cheat?
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Posted: Sun Jan 03, 2010 8:37 am Post subject: |
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It's cute for me. Maybe you should make more releastic sky for it?
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ShadowHopeful Expert Cheater
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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 12:01 pm Post subject: |
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so, i've followed gogodr's suggestion,and this is what i've now got.
Is it me, or has it gotten really dark?
the reason the background's not so good is because i don't know what to put in it, so i just tried abstract with a nice colour scheme.
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gogodr I post too much
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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 3:22 pm Post subject: |
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| the scan lines must be with multiply or screen with a low opacity, they are too strong
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Posted: Mon Jan 04, 2010 4:25 pm Post subject: |
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| The scan lines on the front need the opacity turned waaayyy down.
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Mobsy Master Cheater
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Posted: Tue Jan 05, 2010 8:58 am Post subject: |
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| Sharpies! wrote: | | Oh I know. But the weirdy shape behind it that kinda goes from light to dark from the inside out is what I don't like. |
Agreed. Also, some of the curvy lines just don't seems to fit in there somehow (possibly due to the coulour thing mentioned ealier). I think the choice of coulors is good though and the render is a good choice. I also think its been improved by taking off the scanlines although I'm not sure about the text.
Good overal though.
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