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pic i drew (plz criticize)
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onidiablo
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 2:36 am    Post subject: pic i drew (plz criticize) Reply with quote

can you please criticize this pic! btw its winry from fullmetal alchemist


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PostPosted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 2:40 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

body is fine, face is all wrong

if you want to know whats wrong with head:

-shape
-nose
-mouth
-eyes shape

also apart from it, arms are a little wrong shaped (( her left arm to be more precise ))
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 2:51 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

gogodr wrote:
body is fine, face is all wrong

if you want to know whats wrong with head:

-shape
-nose
-mouth
-eyes shape

also apart from it, arms are a little wrong shaped (( her left arm to be more precise ))

can u point me to a tutorial or something please. thanks for the comment.
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 2:57 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

onidiablo wrote:
gogodr wrote:
body is fine, face is all wrong

if you want to know whats wrong with head:

-shape
-nose
-mouth
-eyes shape

also apart from it, arms are a little wrong shaped (( her left arm to be more precise ))

can u point me to a tutorial or something please. thanks for the comment.

check markcrilley's chanel on youtube

http://www.youtube.com/user/markcrilley
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 11:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Her bust looks a little weird....

Eyes are freaky

Hairs ALRIGHT, maybe put a little texture into it.
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PostPosted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 9:26 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Never knew Winry was a guy.
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 12:25 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

the towel/bath towel around her is done nicely, and so is the stomach.
the thing i find weird is her left arm.
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 8:36 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Pretty good from first glance, the face is a bit rough though. Seems pretty good, much better than i can attempt to do.
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 8:53 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

not bad :D
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 8:54 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

Malayboyz wrote:
not bad Very Happy

Go die.
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 4:41 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Tommy Pickles wrote:
Malayboyz wrote:
not bad :D

Go die.

^What the fuck is this?


As for the picture, it portrays her as quite muscular. Fix that.
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Solomon Grundy
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 5:08 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

I find this kind of weird. Doesn't really look like a woman more of a mix. Sorry but not even the breasts save it from looking like a man.
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 9:48 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The face looks very flat.
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PostPosted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 10:20 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

The body looks decent, Though i think slightly manly, Mabey make her bobos a little larger and keep her shoulder blades in more.

Also the face needs more detail to really sell the fact its a girl. Try some lips.

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PostPosted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 1:00 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

xYashii wrote:
Tommy Pickles wrote:
Malayboyz wrote:
not bad Very Happy

Go die.

^What the fuck is this?


As for the picture, it portrays her as quite muscular. Fix that.

He just spams comments to get his post count up.

As for the picture, face and arms are weird.
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