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onidiablo Cheater
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Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 2:36 am Post subject: pic i drew (plz criticize) |
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can you please criticize this pic! btw its winry from fullmetal alchemist
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gogodr I post too much
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Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 2:40 am Post subject: |
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body is fine, face is all wrong
if you want to know whats wrong with head:
-shape
-nose
-mouth
-eyes shape
also apart from it, arms are a little wrong shaped (( her left arm to be more precise ))
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onidiablo Cheater
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Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 2:51 am Post subject: |
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gogodr wrote: | body is fine, face is all wrong
if you want to know whats wrong with head:
-shape
-nose
-mouth
-eyes shape
also apart from it, arms are a little wrong shaped (( her left arm to be more precise )) |
can u point me to a tutorial or something please. thanks for the comment.
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gogodr I post too much
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Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 2:57 am Post subject: |
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onidiablo wrote: | gogodr wrote: | body is fine, face is all wrong
if you want to know whats wrong with head:
-shape
-nose
-mouth
-eyes shape
also apart from it, arms are a little wrong shaped (( her left arm to be more precise )) |
can u point me to a tutorial or something please. thanks for the comment. |
check markcrilley's chanel on youtube
http://www.youtube.com/user/markcrilley
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DarkEnvy Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 11:54 am Post subject: |
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Her bust looks a little weird....
Eyes are freaky
Hairs ALRIGHT, maybe put a little texture into it.
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cokefag Master Cheater
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Posted: Sun Dec 06, 2009 9:26 pm Post subject: |
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Never knew Winry was a guy.
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Misa Campo Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 12:25 am Post subject: |
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the towel/bath towel around her is done nicely, and so is the stomach.
the thing i find weird is her left arm.
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TheZaw Valve mod
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Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 8:36 am Post subject: |
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Pretty good from first glance, the face is a bit rough though. Seems pretty good, much better than i can attempt to do.
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Dark X Advanced Cheater
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Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 8:53 am Post subject: |
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not bad :D
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shitposter Newbie cheater
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Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 8:54 am Post subject: |
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Malayboyz wrote: | not bad  |
Go die.
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Simon :v Grandmaster Cheater
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Tommy Pickles wrote: | Malayboyz wrote: | not bad :D |
Go die. |
^What the fuck is this?
As for the picture, it portrays her as quite muscular. Fix that.
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Solomon Grundy Cheater
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Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 5:08 pm Post subject: |
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I find this kind of weird. Doesn't really look like a woman more of a mix. Sorry but not even the breasts save it from looking like a man.
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Phox I post too much
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Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 9:48 pm Post subject: |
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The face looks very flat.
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Ampix0 Expert Cheater
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Posted: Mon Dec 07, 2009 10:20 pm Post subject: |
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The body looks decent, Though i think slightly manly, Mabey make her bobos a little larger and keep her shoulder blades in more.
Also the face needs more detail to really sell the fact its a girl. Try some lips.
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shitposter Newbie cheater
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Posted: Tue Dec 08, 2009 1:00 am Post subject: |
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xYashii wrote: | Tommy Pickles wrote: | Malayboyz wrote: | not bad  |
Go die. |
^What the fuck is this?
As for the picture, it portrays her as quite muscular. Fix that. |
He just spams comments to get his post count up.
As for the picture, face and arms are weird.
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