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NooksCranny Master Cheater
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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 1:22 pm Post subject: Battle Robot sig |
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I decided to not put text because I'm an amateur at text placement.
V3 w/ text
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Daniel. I post too much
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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 1:42 pm Post subject: |
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way too messy
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NooksCranny Master Cheater
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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 1:52 pm Post subject: |
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Quote wrote: | way too messy |
please elaborate?
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dark kitty Grandmaster Cheater
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Joshie wrote: | Quote wrote: | way too messy |
please elaborate? |
i don't think he means messy cluttered, but the render kindoff blends into the background, try and make the render stand out
btw how long have you been making sigs
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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 2:27 pm Post subject: |
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dark kitty wrote: | Joshie wrote: | Quote wrote: | way too messy |
please elaborate? |
i don't think he means messy cluttered, but the render kindoff blends into the background, try and make the render stand out
btw how long have you been making sigs |
its funny how i get a range of responses from people. The second signature i posted clearly makes the render stand out. Plus hasn't everybody told me to make the render blend in? Please don't answer for quote, if he didn't mean what he said then let him be the one to relaborate. I've been making signatures for 5 months now, but i took a 4 month break.
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Daniel. I post too much
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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 2:42 pm Post subject: |
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Joshie wrote: | dark kitty wrote: | Joshie wrote: | Quote wrote: | way too messy |
please elaborate? |
i don't think he means messy cluttered, but the render kindoff blends into the background, try and make the render stand out
btw how long have you been making sigs |
its funny how i get a range of responses from people. The second signature i posted clearly makes the render stand out. Plus hasn't everybody told me to make the render blend in? Please don't answer for quote, if he didn't mean what he said then let him be the one to relaborate. I've been making signatures for 5 months now, but i took a 4 month break. |
well the right side is way too distorted and awkward looking, the center seems to dark its hard to make ur focal (ur battle robot) stand out get it?
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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 2:46 pm Post subject: |
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Quote wrote: | Joshie wrote: | dark kitty wrote: | Joshie wrote: | Quote wrote: | way too messy |
please elaborate? |
i don't think he means messy cluttered, but the render kindoff blends into the background, try and make the render stand out
btw how long have you been making sigs |
its funny how i get a range of responses from people. The second signature i posted clearly makes the render stand out. Plus hasn't everybody told me to make the render blend in? Please don't answer for quote, if he didn't mean what he said then let him be the one to relaborate. I've been making signatures for 5 months now, but i took a 4 month break. |
well the right side is way too distorted and awkward looking, the center seems to dark its hard to make ur focal (ur battle robot) stand out get it? |
I was going for that effect on the right side, and if you don't like then good for you. The focal is the face, side wings, and round metal piece on the front; not the entire battle robot. That stills doesn't answer how this signature is messy. "Get ITTTT?"
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Daniel. I post too much
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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 3:31 pm Post subject: |
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Joshie wrote: | Quote wrote: | Joshie wrote: | dark kitty wrote: | Joshie wrote: | Quote wrote: | way too messy |
please elaborate? |
i don't think he means messy cluttered, but the render kindoff blends into the background, try and make the render stand out
btw how long have you been making sigs |
its funny how i get a range of responses from people. The second signature i posted clearly makes the render stand out. Plus hasn't everybody told me to make the render blend in? Please don't answer for quote, if he didn't mean what he said then let him be the one to relaborate. I've been making signatures for 5 months now, but i took a 4 month break. |
well the right side is way too distorted and awkward looking, the center seems to dark its hard to make ur focal (ur battle robot) stand out get it? |
I was going for that effect on the right side, and if you don't like then good for you. The focal is the face, side wings, and round metal piece on the front; not the entire battle robot. That stills doesn't answer how this signature is messy. "Get ITTTT?" |
ok fine w/e hope u keep failing
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Up2Admin I'm a spammer
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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 4:29 pm Post subject: |
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V3 looks good to me...
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Why do people think text is important? Also, you can see a vertical line on the right side of the two versions. V3 is better. I think you need a better canvas, you could do more than just smudge the focal and actually add something.
The light source seems wrong, I don't what that is if it's a flashlight or a gun, so I'll assume it's a flashlight, the light source should be the brightest nearest the flashlight and should fade away little by little as it goes further away from it, like a real flashlight or something. Eh, I don't know, I'm not good at explaining stuff.
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NooksCranny Master Cheater
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Posted: Sun Sep 20, 2009 6:20 pm Post subject: |
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Phixen wrote: | Why do people think text is important? Also, you can see a vertical line on the right side of the two versions. V3 is better. I think you need a better canvas, you could do more than just smudge the focal and actually add something.
The light source seems wrong, I don't what that is if it's a flashlight or a gun, so I'll assume it's a flashlight, the light source should be the brightest nearest the flashlight and should fade away little by little as it goes further away from it, like a real flashlight or something. Eh, I don't know, I'm not good at explaining stuff. |
I tried adding something, but failed as you can tell from v1-v2. I understand what you mean with the light; it should the opposite of what i did. I'll fix that. Thanks.
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Posted: Mon Sep 21, 2009 5:22 pm Post subject: |
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Talix wrote: | No lighting:
baaad
No flow:
baaad
That shit on the right:
baaad
Go read a tutorial.
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your right about that white light in the right. it messes up the robot for me
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