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Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 1:58 pm Post subject: I remember the critiscism about my pixel art so: Update 21/9

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I decided to do some of the stuff I was told and I remade the shield Entirely.
UPDATE: 18/9/2009 sword got longer
UPDATE: 19/9/2009 Shield ditched handle got longer and is remade
QUICK-UPDATE: 19/9/2009 Changed handle palette
Update: 21/9/2009 Made the tip steeper, various changes.
QUICK-UPDATE: 21/9/2009 Changed the hand guard, full black is bad.

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Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 2:04 pm Post subject:

shield looks more like a flag xP but sword looks nice n.n

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Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 2:06 pm Post subject:

D:! Flags

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Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 2:54 pm Post subject:

It should block slashing attacks very good.

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Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 3:04 pm Post subject:

omfg its a cockroache!

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Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 3:10 pm Post subject:

Never seen a cockroach but WHAT IT LOOKS LIKE ONE? DAMN NATURE STEALING MY DESIGN!

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Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 4:01 pm Post subject:

lol the sword look good also the shield to me in a weird way

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Posted: Thu Sep 03, 2009 7:34 pm Post subject:

Sword is too flat, needs more contrast. Try making the outline darker than the colour inside it(shield) but not black. _________________ BENBENBENBENBENBENBENBEN

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Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 12:54 am Post subject:

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Sword is too flat, needs more contrast. Try making the outline darker than the colour inside it(shield) but not black.

Okay, will try to do that but eh...
If it needs more contrast do you mean that the colours need to differ more(Sorry my main language is not English and I've never really read tutorials just watched other people and improved with criticism)?

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Posted: Fri Sep 04, 2009 11:25 am Post subject:

well to me it looks good but when i really think about the sword it looks simple u need to make the sword look unique like the shield

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CrisNMP wrote:

Sword is too flat, needs more contrast. Try making the outline darker than the colour inside it(shield) but not black.

Okay, will try to do that but eh...
If it needs more contrast do you mean that the colours need to differ more(Sorry my main language is not English and I've never really read tutorials just watched other people and improved with criticism)?

Yea try to add tones of gray, also try replacing the black outline with a dark grey one for the blade part
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Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 11:36 am Post subject:

Updated sword.

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Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 2:22 pm Post subject:

The sword is a bit square, but shaded nicely. You are definately better at shading than me.

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Posted: Sun Sep 06, 2009 11:07 pm Post subject:

BUMP Too bad topic title is too long, or else I'd say that the sword was updated AGES ago. New criticism pz.

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Posted: Mon Sep 07, 2009 11:33 am Post subject:

Black outlines of anything are a a no-no.

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