| View previous topic :: View next topic |
| Author |
Message |
Borq
Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
 Reputation: 0
Joined: 16 Dec 2007
Posts: 1493
|
 Posted: Sun Aug 23, 2009 9:48 pm Post subject: Way to steal the title of this topic, 'DF Plus'. |
 |
|
Made in Flash. For AQW. I thought I'd post this here, where people can actually criticize.
I call it, the Sterling Wave:
Last edited by Borq on Mon Aug 24, 2009 6:44 pm; edited 1 time in total |
|
| Back to top |
|
 |
Fantasy
I post too much
![]() Reputation: 13
Joined: 29 Jul 2007
Posts: 3113
|
| Posted: Sun Aug 23, 2009 10:40 pm Post subject: |
|
|
It's very nice. I like it.
Looks a bit like something from halo tho :b
|
|
| Back to top |
|
|
gogodr
I post too much
 Reputation: 125
Joined: 19 Dec 2006
Posts: 2041
|
| Posted: Sun Aug 23, 2009 11:37 pm Post subject: |
|
|
I think it looks like from WoW
nice indeed
though angle of the blade is a little weird xPshould be a bit more thicker I think
|
|
| Back to top |
|
|
Borq
Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
Reputation: 0
Joined: 16 Dec 2007
Posts: 1493
|
| Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 12:10 am Post subject: |
|
|
| So you think it's a bit narrow?
|
|
| Back to top |
|
|
gogodr
I post too much
Reputation: 125
Joined: 19 Dec 2006
Posts: 2041
|
| Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 8:32 am Post subject: |
|
|
kinda like that, but its just a suggestion from me xP
|
|
| Back to top |
|
|
Borq
Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
Reputation: 0
Joined: 16 Dec 2007
Posts: 1493
|
| Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 8:37 am Post subject: |
|
|
| I had edited it yesterday, but the outcome was a bit plain.
|
|
| Back to top |
|
|
Slappy101
I post too much
 Reputation: 1
Joined: 19 Jun 2007
Posts: 2602
|
| Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 10:09 am Post subject: |
|
|
It's far too plain, you need to add more detail and curves to it. Here's one I made a while ago even though it's referenced you can tell the difference (the white line is from a lightning animation)
|
|
| Back to top |
|
|
Borq
Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
Reputation: 0
Joined: 16 Dec 2007
Posts: 1493
|
| Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 6:25 pm Post subject: |
|
|
| Slappy101 wrote: | It's far too plain, you need to add more detail and curves to it. Here's one I made a while ago even though it's referenced you can tell the difference (the white line is from a lightning animation)
|
I modeled it on simplicity and flow, I think it looks fine, but that's my opinion. And It doesn't need curves, it's streamlined because I wanted to inspire the thought of water and waves, not rocks and bulkiness. Also, I can see the difference between your weapon and mine. Yours has detail that mine does not, but that comes from mine being made from my drawings, and yours being traced and copied from a picture. I'm no artist, and I definitely can't put much detail and effort to my swords.
|
|
| Back to top |
|
|
Up2Admin
I'm a spammer
 Reputation: 126
Joined: 17 Oct 2007
Posts: 6547
Location: Texas
|
| Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 7:14 pm Post subject: |
|
|
| Banksy wrote: | | Slappy101 wrote: | It's far too plain, you need to add more detail and curves to it. Here's one I made a while ago even though it's referenced you can tell the difference (the white line is from a lightning animation)
|
I modeled it on simplicity and flow, I think it looks fine, but that's my opinion. And It doesn't need curves, it's streamlined because I wanted to inspire the thought of water and waves, not rocks and bulkiness. Also, I can see the difference between your weapon and mine. Yours has detail that mine does not, but that comes from mine being made from my drawings, and yours being traced and copied from a picture. I'm no artist, and I definitely can't put much detail and effort to my swords. |
Curves would help inspire the thought of water and waves...
_________________
|
|
| Back to top |
|
|
Borq
Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
Reputation: 0
Joined: 16 Dec 2007
Posts: 1493
|
| Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 7:38 pm Post subject: |
|
|
| Up2Admin wrote: | | Banksy wrote: | | Slappy101 wrote: | It's far too plain, you need to add more detail and curves to it. Here's one I made a while ago even though it's referenced you can tell the difference (the white line is from a lightning animation)
|
I modeled it on simplicity and flow, I think it looks fine, but that's my opinion. And It doesn't need curves, it's streamlined because I wanted to inspire the thought of water and waves, not rocks and bulkiness. Also, I can see the difference between your weapon and mine. Yours has detail that mine does not, but that comes from mine being made from my drawings, and yours being traced and copied from a picture. I'm no artist, and I definitely can't put much detail and effort to my swords. |
Curves would help inspire the thought of water and waves... |
I thought about that after I posted.
|
|
| Back to top |
|
|
~Lurker
I post too much
 Reputation: 0
Joined: 20 Sep 2008
Posts: 2259
Location: lurking moar
|
| Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 7:48 pm Post subject: |
|
|
Convert lines to fills. Pretty sure that's the difference between Slappy's first example and second example.
_________________
|
|
| Back to top |
|
|
Borq
Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
Reputation: 0
Joined: 16 Dec 2007
Posts: 1493
|
| Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 7:54 pm Post subject: |
|
|
| ~Lurker wrote: | | Convert lines to fills. Pretty sure that's the difference between Slappy's first example and second example. |
No, with the second example, he completely removed the lines. I was going to convert lines, but I had meant the sword to take only 45 min. And it's not always reliable, meaning that sometimes, lines dissapear completely.
|
|
| Back to top |
|
|
~Lurker
I post too much
Reputation: 0
Joined: 20 Sep 2008
Posts: 2259
Location: lurking moar
|
| Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 7:58 pm Post subject: |
|
|
If you don't like the result, you can always undo it.
_________________
|
|
| Back to top |
|
|
Borq
Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
Reputation: 0
Joined: 16 Dec 2007
Posts: 1493
|
| Posted: Mon Aug 24, 2009 8:07 pm Post subject: |
|
|
| ~Lurker wrote: | | If you don't like the result, you can always undo it. |
Yes, I realize that. I just don't want to work on the weapon anymore.
|
|
| Back to top |
|
|
educofu
Expert Cheater
![]() Reputation: 3
Joined: 21 Aug 2009
Posts: 171
Location: Brazil,MG,OP
|
|
| Back to top |
|
|
|
FAQ
Search
Memberlist
Usergroups
Register
Profile
Log in to check your private messages
Log in
! you could work on it a bit more with photoshop, like adding some shadows, etc...