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dark kitty Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Sun Jun 07, 2009 9:38 pm Post subject: My First Sig |
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Here's my first sig, please rate and comment, (i know that the depth is kind of):
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redslothx Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Sun Jun 07, 2009 11:14 pm Post subject: |
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depth is "):" because it loks too messy and the render isn't lit up properly, but if this really is your first try, then it's actually quite good for.
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Kronos Grandmaster Cheater Supreme
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Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 5:59 am Post subject: |
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Same as redsloth. looks a bit messy. but good for a first one
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Phixen I post too much
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Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 6:07 am Post subject: |
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Usually, people making their first ever sigs just slap some render there and add text. But you actually did more than just slap something. =D
Yes, depth does need a bit of adjusting. The render is LQ, pick a better L render next time, and don't make it too small.
The yellow symbol on the bottom right seems to be out-of-place, I suggest you just remove it.
Border is too thick. 3-5 pixels is enough for a cinematic border.
Your C4D usage...is a little meh. The flow is good though from my point of view.
The background seems to be a little random. If it hadn't been for the random C4D's (are those C4D's?) you placed for the background, the right side would be empty, make the render a bit bigger or don't resize it too small.
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dark kitty Grandmaster Cheater
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Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 9:29 am Post subject: |
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thanks for the comments guys. I'm reading up on some tutorials and am working on another sig.
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zyndr0m I post too much
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Posted: Mon Jun 08, 2009 9:35 am Post subject: |
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Phixen wrote: | Usually, people making their first ever sigs just slap some render there and add text. But you actually did more than just slap something. =D
Yes, depth does need a bit of adjusting. The render is LQ, pick a better L render next time, and don't make it too small.
The yellow symbol on the bottom right seems to be out-of-place, I suggest you just remove it.
Border is too thick. 3-5 pixels is enough for a cinematic border.
Your C4D usage...is a little meh. The flow is good though from my point of view.
The background seems to be a little random. If it hadn't been for the random C4D's (are those C4D's?) you placed for the background, the right side would be empty, make the render a bit bigger or don't resize it too small. |
Its another style of border, Cinematic border. They are supposed to be the size he used.
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omegalordm Cheater
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Posted: Tue Jun 09, 2009 7:58 am Post subject: |
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Looks good very good for first one but what is that round thingy on the right?
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